Point 7 of the page-wording review. The pages no longer show their data structure as headings, and they no longer explain their own conventions. - Level 1 is one screen: claim, status badge, three figures, the technology row, and one sentence carrying one link. Measured in headless Chrome at 1440x900: 1404-1845 px tall before, exactly 900 px (no scroll) after, on all six area pages. - DocPage: no kicker line, no visible level label, no "Evidence for this page" heading or instruction note, no "Drill-downs" list, no "Status <word> - sentence" footer. The artefact table starts at level 2, under the heading "Artefacts"; the history timeline is level 2 only. - Landing page: "Start here" link text gone, "How to read this site" panel gone, the footer's status-label explainer gone. - Content, presentation only, no claim softened: the leading H1 that duplicated the page title removed from all 41 documents; level 1 bodies reduced to the constraint as ordinary prose plus the way in; "**Status: ...**" prefixes removed from the artefact stubs; "## Drill-downs" and "## Period and confidence" removed from the level 2 pages, with the cross-area links moved into the prose. - The six level 1 claims are now sentences with a subject, and use commas instead of middots. Same facts, no new ones. Not in this commit: the 35 level 2 and 3 claims still use the compact CV style. That is a voice decision for Sam, not a wording tidy-up. make validate: 41 documents, 0 violations. go test ./...: pass. (cherry picked from commit 03009f80fc7815ad7719412e125df9297a6e653f)
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id: platform-network
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area: platform
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level: 3
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title: "Artefact — Network layout and remote access"
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claim: "A private mesh and SSH everywhere · services bound to loopback · and one public listener at the edge terminating TLS for the sites that are allowed to be seen."
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confidence: running
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period: "2020–"
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tech: [Tailscale, SSH, Caddy, DNS, Termux]
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metrics: [{label: "public listeners per service", value: 1}]
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artefacts: []
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public: true
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last_verified: 2026-10-26
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tags: [platform, networking, security, artefact]
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---
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The topology diagram lands in Phase 7 with addresses and hostnames redacted.
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## What the artefact is
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The layout: hosts on a private mesh for remote access, SSH on every machine, a phone used as a terminal, and an edge host that terminates TLS and proxies to loopback-bound services. New services bind to loopback by default; making something public is an explicit edge change, not a side effect of starting a container.
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## What it proves
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Security posture chosen rather than inherited: no service is reachable because it happened to bind to all interfaces, and there is exactly one place where the outside world meets the estate.
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## When it is delivered
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Phase 7. Internal addressing, hostnames and public DNS names are excluded from publication by the redaction pass.
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