Point 7 of the page-wording review. The pages no longer show their data structure as headings, and they no longer explain their own conventions. - Level 1 is one screen: claim, status badge, three figures, the technology row, and one sentence carrying one link. Measured in headless Chrome at 1440x900: 1404-1845 px tall before, exactly 900 px (no scroll) after, on all six area pages. - DocPage: no kicker line, no visible level label, no "Evidence for this page" heading or instruction note, no "Drill-downs" list, no "Status <word> - sentence" footer. The artefact table starts at level 2, under the heading "Artefacts"; the history timeline is level 2 only. - Landing page: "Start here" link text gone, "How to read this site" panel gone, the footer's status-label explainer gone. - Content, presentation only, no claim softened: the leading H1 that duplicated the page title removed from all 41 documents; level 1 bodies reduced to the constraint as ordinary prose plus the way in; "**Status: ...**" prefixes removed from the artefact stubs; "## Drill-downs" and "## Period and confidence" removed from the level 2 pages, with the cross-area links moved into the prose. - The six level 1 claims are now sentences with a subject, and use commas instead of middots. Same facts, no new ones. Not in this commit: the 35 level 2 and 3 claims still use the compact CV style. That is a voice decision for Sam, not a wording tidy-up. make validate: 41 documents, 0 violations. go test ./...: pass. (cherry picked from commit 03009f80fc7815ad7719412e125df9297a6e653f)
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id: edge-lora-sprinkler
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area: edge
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level: 3
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title: "Artefact — LoRa irrigation under solar power"
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claim: "A solar-powered controller that sleeps · wakes on radio · and drives a solenoid — with the first version polling over a message queue instead."
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confidence: running
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period: "2020–"
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tech: [ESP32, LoRa, LiFePO, Solenoid, Home Assistant, RabbitMQ]
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metrics: [{label: "major revisions", value: 2}]
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artefacts: []
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public: true
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last_verified: 2026-10-26
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tags: [edge, lora, solar, irrigation, artefact]
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---
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The bill of materials and the wake-on-radio change land in Phase 7.
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## What the artefact is
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The build: solar panel, charge controller, LiFePO battery, ESP32, LoRa module, relay and solenoid valve. Version one woke on a schedule and polled through a message queue to learn whether it should run. Version two is better: a LoRa packet can wake the ESP32 from deep sleep and switch the valve directly, so on-time is short and the battery is not spent asking whether there is work.
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## What it proves
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Iteration on a real constraint. The first version worked; the second version was designed around the power cost of asking, which is the kind of decision you only make if you are watching the battery.
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## Limits stated on the page
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Watering is partly scheduled and partly a person. The routine lives in the automation layer and the voice assistant can trigger it, but the garden is not fully automatic and the page does not pretend otherwise.
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## When it is delivered
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Phase 7. Source: evidence notes section 1.
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