Point 7 of the page-wording review. The pages no longer show their data structure as headings, and they no longer explain their own conventions. - Level 1 is one screen: claim, status badge, three figures, the technology row, and one sentence carrying one link. Measured in headless Chrome at 1440x900: 1404-1845 px tall before, exactly 900 px (no scroll) after, on all six area pages. - DocPage: no kicker line, no visible level label, no "Evidence for this page" heading or instruction note, no "Drill-downs" list, no "Status <word> - sentence" footer. The artefact table starts at level 2, under the heading "Artefacts"; the history timeline is level 2 only. - Landing page: "Start here" link text gone, "How to read this site" panel gone, the footer's status-label explainer gone. - Content, presentation only, no claim softened: the leading H1 that duplicated the page title removed from all 41 documents; level 1 bodies reduced to the constraint as ordinary prose plus the way in; "**Status: ...**" prefixes removed from the artefact stubs; "## Drill-downs" and "## Period and confidence" removed from the level 2 pages, with the cross-area links moved into the prose. - The six level 1 claims are now sentences with a subject, and use commas instead of middots. Same facts, no new ones. Not in this commit: the 35 level 2 and 3 claims still use the compact CV style. That is a voice decision for Sam, not a wording tidy-up. make validate: 41 documents, 0 violations. go test ./...: pass. (cherry picked from commit 03009f80fc7815ad7719412e125df9297a6e653f)
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| platform-network | platform | 3 | Artefact — Network layout and remote access | A private mesh and SSH everywhere · services bound to loopback · and one public listener at the edge terminating TLS for the sites that are allowed to be seen. | running | 2020– |
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The topology diagram lands in Phase 7 with addresses and hostnames redacted.
What the artefact is
The layout: hosts on a private mesh for remote access, SSH on every machine, a phone used as a terminal, and an edge host that terminates TLS and proxies to loopback-bound services. New services bind to loopback by default; making something public is an explicit edge change, not a side effect of starting a container.
What it proves
Security posture chosen rather than inherited: no service is reachable because it happened to bind to all interfaces, and there is exactly one place where the outside world meets the estate.
When it is delivered
Phase 7. Internal addressing, hostnames and public DNS names are excluded from publication by the redaction pass.