site: cut the template's own labels out of the pages
Point 7 of the page-wording review. The pages no longer show their data structure as headings, and they no longer explain their own conventions. - Level 1 is one screen: claim, status badge, three figures, the technology row, and one sentence carrying one link. Measured in headless Chrome at 1440x900: 1404-1845 px tall before, exactly 900 px (no scroll) after, on all six area pages. - DocPage: no kicker line, no visible level label, no "Evidence for this page" heading or instruction note, no "Drill-downs" list, no "Status <word> - sentence" footer. The artefact table starts at level 2, under the heading "Artefacts"; the history timeline is level 2 only. - Landing page: "Start here" link text gone, "How to read this site" panel gone, the footer's status-label explainer gone. - Content, presentation only, no claim softened: the leading H1 that duplicated the page title removed from all 41 documents; level 1 bodies reduced to the constraint as ordinary prose plus the way in; "**Status: ...**" prefixes removed from the artefact stubs; "## Drill-downs" and "## Period and confidence" removed from the level 2 pages, with the cross-area links moved into the prose. - The six level 1 claims are now sentences with a subject, and use commas instead of middots. Same facts, no new ones. Not in this commit: the 35 level 2 and 3 claims still use the compact CV style. That is a voice decision for Sam, not a wording tidy-up. make validate: 41 documents, 0 violations. go test ./...: pass. (cherry picked from commit 03009f80fc7815ad7719412e125df9297a6e653f)
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tags: [edge, architecture, power, artefact]
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# Artefact — Edge architecture · power · radio · deep sleep
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**Status: stub.** One annotated diagram of a representative node and the radio path lands in Phase 7.
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One annotated diagram of a representative node and the radio path lands in Phase 7.
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## What the artefact is
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tags: [edge, failures, artefact]
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# Artefact — The failures · kept in the record
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**Status: in progress.** Two items are being rebuilt, one is postponed. The page is not finished because the work is not finished.
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Two items are being rebuilt, one is postponed. The page is not finished because the work is not finished.
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## What the artefact is
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tags: [edge, doorbell, vision, voice, artefact]
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# Artefact — Front door · vision · voice · and a rebuild
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**Status: in progress.** The device was built and is being rebuilt. The page states this rather than describing it as finished.
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The device was built and is being rebuilt. The page states this rather than describing it as finished.
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## What the artefact is
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tags: [edge, lora, solar, irrigation, artefact]
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# Artefact — LoRa irrigation under solar power
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**Status: stub.** The bill of materials and the wake-on-radio change land in Phase 7.
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The bill of materials and the wake-on-radio change land in Phase 7.
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## What the artefact is
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tags: [edge, sensors, actuation, artefact]
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# Artefact — Sensors and actuation
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**Status: stub.** A sensor and actuator table lands in Phase 7.
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A sensor and actuator table lands in Phase 7.
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## What the artefact is
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tags: [edge, audio, snapcast, artefact]
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# Artefact — Distributed audio · eight endpoints with ducking
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**Status: stub.** The topology diagram and a short recording of ducking land in Phase 7.
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The topology diagram and a short recording of ducking land in Phase 7.
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## What the artefact is
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tags: [edge, zigbee, lighting, artefact]
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# Artefact — Hand-built Zigbee routers and lighting
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**Status: stub.** The router build and a zone map land in Phase 7.
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The router build and a zone map land in Phase 7.
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## What the artefact is
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