site: cut the template's own labels out of the pages
Point 7 of the page-wording review. The pages no longer show their data structure as headings, and they no longer explain their own conventions. - Level 1 is one screen: claim, status badge, three figures, the technology row, and one sentence carrying one link. Measured in headless Chrome at 1440x900: 1404-1845 px tall before, exactly 900 px (no scroll) after, on all six area pages. - DocPage: no kicker line, no visible level label, no "Evidence for this page" heading or instruction note, no "Drill-downs" list, no "Status <word> - sentence" footer. The artefact table starts at level 2, under the heading "Artefacts"; the history timeline is level 2 only. - Landing page: "Start here" link text gone, "How to read this site" panel gone, the footer's status-label explainer gone. - Content, presentation only, no claim softened: the leading H1 that duplicated the page title removed from all 41 documents; level 1 bodies reduced to the constraint as ordinary prose plus the way in; "**Status: ...**" prefixes removed from the artefact stubs; "## Drill-downs" and "## Period and confidence" removed from the level 2 pages, with the cross-area links moved into the prose. - The six level 1 claims are now sentences with a subject, and use commas instead of middots. Same facts, no new ones. Not in this commit: the 35 level 2 and 3 claims still use the compact CV style. That is a voice decision for Sam, not a wording tidy-up. make validate: 41 documents, 0 violations. go test ./...: pass. (cherry picked from commit 03009f80fc7815ad7719412e125df9297a6e653f)
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area: edge
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level: 1
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title: "Edge & Devices"
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claim: "Builds and maintains a twenty-node edge fleet — constrained devices · custom radio · solar power · deep sleep · and sensors — reporting into a single automation layer."
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claim: "Sam builds and maintains a twenty-node edge fleet — constrained devices on solar power and deep sleep, with custom radio and sensors — that reports into a single automation layer."
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confidence: running
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period: "2020–"
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tech: [ESP32, LoRa, Zigbee, MQTT, Home Assistant, Snapcast, Raspberry Pi]
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last_verified: 2026-10-26
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tags: [edge, iot, esp32, lora, zigbee]
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---
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# Edge & Devices
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**Claim.** Twenty or more nodes — ten ESP32 devices, two hand-built Zigbee routers and eight Pi audio endpoints — across nine lighting zones and twenty automations, all reporting into one automation layer.
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**Status.** Running. Some of it is finished, some is being rebuilt, and at least one thing was destroyed by the animal it was built for. All three states are shown.
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**Why it is credible.** These devices are outdoors, on solar, in deep sleep, and they must keep working when nobody is looking. The failures on this page cost real time and are documented as failures.
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**Start here.** [The capability page](edge-fleet.md) covers the architecture, the radio, the audio and what broke.
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The devices are outdoors on solar and asleep most of their lives, and they have to keep working when nobody is looking; what failed is written down. The architecture, the radio and the failures are on the [fleet page](edge-fleet.md).
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